London Olympics
During the Olympic Games, I watched Joseph Sullivan and Nathan Cohen race for a gold medal in the 2012 Olympic Games.
The loud siren blew and the Kiwis were off in the crystal clear water.
They were in fifth place at the start, but they got faster and faster until they got to first place.
It was victory and they were so proud, they couldn't stand up.
I jumped for joy.
Well done Hunter-Rose, your description of the race is exciting and I really enjoyed it.Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Hunter. I really liked your conclusion, maybe you could have described more, but really good otherwise.
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter Rose,
ReplyDeleteI like the image you gave me when you said, "The water was crystal clear." I also like the word victory, it is so much stronger than they won.
I wonder if there was a time when you were so excited with your achievements, that you jumped for joy?
Mrs Atkins
hi hunter-ross i enjoyed your story i like how you jumped for joy
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